tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8253082998032774301.post5499316840658163885..comments2023-05-03T04:58:26.255-07:00Comments on here to read and write: A Signasuqihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05478950013985706858noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8253082998032774301.post-62540874997413316302010-08-28T07:42:12.060-07:002010-08-28T07:42:12.060-07:00Thanks Rameshji, I´m glad you liked it!
Funny stu...Thanks Rameshji, I´m glad you liked it!<br /><br />Funny stuff, your poetry!asuqihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05478950013985706858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8253082998032774301.post-36068844790081032342010-08-28T07:24:44.394-07:002010-08-28T07:24:44.394-07:00A lovely soothing read.. I flowed with it..thanks....A lovely soothing read.. I flowed with it..thanks.. <br /><br />Do visit me for a laugh if you wish to have one..Earlier to that is 3ww.Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8253082998032774301.post-87491234809667563262010-08-28T05:34:33.022-07:002010-08-28T05:34:33.022-07:00VL Sheridan: Thank you so much! I´m really glad yo...VL Sheridan: Thank you so much! I´m really glad you liked it =)<br /><br />K: Awww, you say such nice things! I´m so happy you liked it!<br /><br />Coraline: Thank you so much! And, yes, I wasn´t sure about ´raffle´, but I don´t have a better word and the dictionaries will only take me so far… Thanks for your input!<br /><br />Megan: Hi you! Nice to see you here =) And TY for your kind comment, I´m glad you liked it!<br /><br />Angel: Thank you, I´m happy you thought so =)<br /><br />bunnygirl: Thank you! It´s so sweet of you to choose the magical aspect, I was writing it with a more sad reality in mind. I´m really glad you liked it =)<br /><br />gautami triphaty: Oh, believe me, I will =)asuqihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05478950013985706858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8253082998032774301.post-75928413028717014972010-08-26T06:45:10.609-07:002010-08-26T06:45:10.609-07:00Keep writing!
reaching outKeep writing!<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/08/reconciliation.html" rel="nofollow">reaching out</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8253082998032774301.post-14393721576659620112010-08-25T22:03:17.572-07:002010-08-25T22:03:17.572-07:00I really liked this. It reminded me of that book ...I really liked this. It reminded me of that book - I'll remember the name later - written by a woman who lived in a favela in Rio. The cockroach immediately disgusted me (we have way too many of the horrible things here) but when it turned out to be magical, I was sorry that the children accidentally killed it. Your last line is so appropriate to the piece. It seems off-topic, but it suits perfectly.Ann (bunnygirl)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8253082998032774301.post-33029290697297060702010-08-25T18:50:57.266-07:002010-08-25T18:50:57.266-07:00Very touching piece.Very touching piece.Angelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15164957477462458783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8253082998032774301.post-30681593358599596112010-08-25T17:37:15.452-07:002010-08-25T17:37:15.452-07:00What a beautiful and unexpected piece. The venerat...What a beautiful and unexpected piece. The veneration of the cucaracha brings this to a very interesting level. Very good.Bronte, Althttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15969512630631250635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8253082998032774301.post-52872807768414918702010-08-25T16:40:27.834-07:002010-08-25T16:40:27.834-07:00this was gorgeous. My only suggestion, I think you...this was gorgeous. My only suggestion, I think you use th word raffle too many times. There may be another word that could describ it in other places. That aside, a fantastic piece.<br /><br /><a href="http://strikingwrites.blogspot.com/2010/08/world-of-lost-souls.html" rel="nofollow">The World of Lost Souls</a>Coraline J. Thompsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08904161212241564535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8253082998032774301.post-85841837662725402092010-08-25T14:34:41.122-07:002010-08-25T14:34:41.122-07:00asuqi
this is really beautiful... a joy to read. ...asuqi<br />this is really beautiful... a joy to read. this is fresh and different and quite special. Good writing, terrific!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8253082998032774301.post-55245459685355097892010-08-25T13:28:19.644-07:002010-08-25T13:28:19.644-07:00Asuqi-
Really lovely piece; I especially like the...Asuqi-<br /><br />Really lovely piece; I especially like the detail of the table cloth and flowers in the midst of poverty. What a hard life for this lovely girl. Love the way she's taken over Momma's job. <br /><br />Well done!VL Sheridanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12831104283855298430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8253082998032774301.post-43685662616435993952010-08-25T13:26:08.372-07:002010-08-25T13:26:08.372-07:00I´m off to bed but I love you!
Yes! Please! Thank...I´m off to bed but I love you!<br /><br />Yes! Please! Thanks!asuqihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05478950013985706858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8253082998032774301.post-3079804463755473612010-08-25T13:08:23.734-07:002010-08-25T13:08:23.734-07:00Asuqi, darling, this is INCREDIBLE. I love this, I...Asuqi, darling, this is INCREDIBLE. I love this, I adore it, I adore you for writing it.<br /><br />I would not worry about the minor punctuation errors, or anything else. The flow, the voice, the story itself is spectacular.<br /><br />I know you haven't done this before, but would you consider submitting this to some lit zines? I think I know a few places that might be interested, and I am offering my help in "cleaning it up," so to speak. Just those minor issues, as I had said. <br /><br />If you are interested, you know where to find me...R.S. Bohnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09101260459422806220noreply@blogger.com